Okay, face it: the academic year is
about to begin. This ain’t no party. This ain’t
no disco. This ain’t no fooling
around. Put away the sunscreen, dump
all those plans you had for the Summer of Continuous Industry and Focus out
back with the compost. For many of us
reading this blog, the creative writing workshop is heading straight at us,
whether we’ll be teaching or taking one.
So I can think of no more appropriate poem to post today than this
beauty by Rodney Jones, the tongue-in-cheek raconteur I am always eager to
read, because just as you start to think you’re having way too much fun to be
reading a serious poem, he plunges into the depths of something. “The
Ante” first appeared in New Ohio Review
10, Fall 2011.
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THE ANTE
First
Workshop
A few sonnets about nature and the
Greek gods.
Many free-verse poems in all lowercase
letters.
Huey wrote of madness, Maddox of
possums.
John played the sadness of empty
stadiums.
Two berets, one silver-tipped cane,
tweedy blazers.
In most Natalie poems, she took off
her clothes.
The year of the Tet offensive. Wallace in Montgomery.
We read James Wright, Richard
Wilbur, Anne Sexton.
One Friday an ex-guidance counselor
from Jasper
leapt through the window of a
cafeteria, shouting
“I am the son of Jesus Christ! Behold the rapture!”
But nothing much happened in Poetry
Writing 301
until Walter C. Avery wrote that a
black swan,
born in the infralapsarian brain of
a garbage dump,
would crack the codes of the
Southern Baptists.
And for this jack-surreal, mildly
apocalyptic truffle
was taken for near genius material,
practically
a second Edgar Allan Poe, until Sam
Maisel
submitted his “Poem for The
Worksheet Typist,”
which made everyone consider how
scandalous
it must have seemed for her, a
local woman,
a seamstress, and mother of
Christian athletes,
to run across “I know you think
you’ve seen it all before,
but this is duck rape, feathered
love.” And some
in the critique afterward, praised
the line-endings;
one person even mentioned “The
Second Coming,”
which, admittedly,
made me blanch with envy,
so I had wanted to say something
about how
sometimes the subject is not what
you think
or the ones you imagine you are
talking about
stand abruptly and begin to talk
back to you,
but spring was bearing down on the
workshop,
ripping out pages, grinding the
opinions to nubs.
So much energy in the
streets—demonstrations,
happenings, awakenings—so many
instances
of sudden and involuntary
enlightenment,
though mostly my friends and I spent
our nights
on Sixth Street drinking beer at
The Chukkar
or crouched in a huddle around a
record player.
By the time I thought of Sam’s duck
again,
May had slipped into June and June
into July,
and what is poetry in a copper
tubing factory?
A cloud would fan out around the
tubes
as the crane lifted them from the
soaping vats
after they had softened in the
furnace.
My job was to crimp a point on each
of them.
Then the next man would carefully
run them
through a die. Down the line I could see
the process repeating: the furnace, the point,
the die—the tubes and men
diminishing.
All night the saws screeched and
whined.
The pointers clattered. The press roared.
That was the beauty of it. You could sing.
No one would hear. You could say anything.
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Some forty-five years later, the
workshop Jones describes sounds very familiar, though I don’t see many berets
these days. The idea of poetry, “the
beauty of it,” and I think Whitman would agree, is supposed to be our liberation
from the phrase “supposed to be.” You’re
supposed to be freed of all those rules – social, idiomatic, topical – enough
to say what you need to say. Yet if
we’re not careful the creative writing workshop becomes like any organized
group of people, fraught with sidelong looks, with political and aesthetic
pressures. Is he allowed to say
that? Can she get away with that
metaphor? Self-consciousness naturally interferes with pure expression, and writers
can be pigeonholed even if only one or two of their poems memorably mentioned
possums or nakedness. Well, what is poetry in a copper tubing factory? For the speaker in this poem, at this moment,
perhaps it’s a relief to be away from people grouped about a table civilizing, judging,
taming each other and imposing their views on what’s important to him. We write in order to be read, sure. But also, and maybe foremost, to sound our
barbaric yawp over the roofs of the world.
Rodney Jones has published nine books of poetry, the most recent
being Imaginary Logic, which appeared
last fall from Houghton Mifflin. He has
been the recipient of the National Book Critics Circle Award, the Harper Lee
Award, and the Kingsley-Tufts Award. He is
a professor of
English at Southern Illinois University at Carbondale.
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed -- thanks for the opportunity, David! -- presenting these poems from New Ohio Review all summer long, and I
hope you’ll seek out the other good poems we publish. Meet you up on the roof.
--JAR