I’d planned on following yesterday’s post with the good news, but that line about not actually liking poetry feels like a rusty nail—so let’s hammer it down before we move on to “We Are All Poets” later in the week.
First, a caveat: I read and think about poetry all day, but I’m not an academic. I don’t read poetry scholarship, other than to see if anyone else argues for the same opinions as mine, but then usually I get bored and give up looking. I don’t even know what to call “poetry scholarship”; there’s probably some word for it, poesiametalalalology, or something like that, but I don’t know it. I received not one but three review copies of Edward Hirsh’s A Poet’s Glossary—I gave two away at our open mic night, and the hardcover is sitting unopened on my bookshelf, looking stately. All this to say: I don’t know if what I’m about to write is obvious, or redundant, or ignorant. If so, just let me have it in the comments.
The problem of poetry’s place in contemporary American culture is unavoidable, no matter how little you pay attention to the gossip. There’s been a “new” article published on the subject at least once a month for the last two decades, I’m sure. I could link to a few but why bother? Just google “why no one reads poetry” or “only poets read poetry” or “is poetry dead?” and take your pick. There are just as many articles about how these articles about the death of poetry need to die, because look at all these poet laureates, or submissions, or MFA programs, or slams, etc.
Poetry really does have a problem—it isn’t dying, though, just adapting to the destructive forces of modern life, like everything else on the planet. Poetry is the urban coyote of the art world, or maybe an apocalyptic cockroach: It lives a different life now, but it lives and will live on.
For thousands, probably tens of thousands of years, poetry served a very clear and important role as the only way to fix language. Poetry pinned the wings of narrative, and helped oral stories and rituals leap from one generation to the next mostly unaltered. Musical rhythms and repetitions embedded in speech were a matter of life and death—rituals brought the herds and the rains and appeased the gods; stories shared warnings and told of our place in the cosmos. For that reason, I think poetry is, maybe not in our DNA, but a part of our epigenetic heritage, let’s say. And it worked—see the striking similarities in the global flood myths as evidence. Or the universal power of a passionate speech. Poetry matters, and has mattered, for a very long time.
But this use of poetry has also been under assault for a long time—every piece of technology, from the earliest cuneiform texts to the iPhone video camera, has chipped away at poetry’s original source of value, to the point none of that value is left. The idea of using poetry for communication or commemoration is anachronistic, to say the least.
The unindoctrinated, the “people” who don’t (yet) read poetry (as opposed to the “poets” who do) are still stuck with the ancient idea of how poetry is used—and so they find no use for it. Story lives in movies, music in the mp3s, memory in the digital camera. How can poetry compete with any of that?
As almost everyone reading this knows, poetry evolves, and has been evolving for centuries—real modern poetry has very little to do with storytelling or record keeping. Instead, it taps into that subconscious, structural, cognitive, inherited, epigenetic (whatever you want to call it) deep history of human culture—from a nursery rhymes’ role in language acquisition to a liturgical play of emotion—and becomes a brief but direct connection from mind to mind. The art of poetry has evolved into the transformative injection of another’s mental state into your own being.
I’ve used this analogy many times, but another way to put it is that poetry is magic. A poem is a spell, cast—a string of sounds that, when recited correctly, changes consciousness from one position to another. It’s abracadabra hocus pocusing Bugs Bunny into a bat.
I can sense the skepticism from here, 12 hours or days or weeks in the past, so a few examples.
In our contributor notes of our current issue, Deborah P. Kolodji explains why she loves haiku:
The words of Bashō pop into my head—translated by Lucien Stryk, ‘summer grasses/ all that remains/ of a warrior’s dreams’—and I start to cry. The sadness of the earth, the memories of the fallen, and the words of a seventeenth century poet in Japan all come together in a moment of connection. Separated by centuries and thousands of miles, Bashō and I are in the same place. This is why I love haiku.
Just saying those words takes her there, to Bashō’s hut and the grasses, and brings real tears. Poetry can be a mantra, a touchstone. When I’m feeling down, I recite to myself E.E. Cumming’s “Into the Strenuous Briefness”—thinking of the “i do,world” and life as a strenuous briefness, always seems to inspire a strangely joyous resolve.
Poetry does this in many ways, though, and it’s always through voice—poetry is the music of speech, but is unique in that the reader is the artist’s instrument. When I read a poem by Robert Frost—even silently to myself—it’s Frost regulating my own breath like a conductor from the grave. When I read a poem about an experience that I don’t know, or maybe even can’t know, suddenly I can, in a way that would never be conveyed outside of art, and never as directly as through the art of poetry.
My favorite feature we at Rattle is probably Poets Respond, where we publish a poem every Sunday morning about the news. Every week I read a hundred often powerful reactions to the world around us.
As a white man, I have no idea what it’s like—what it really feels like—to be a Muslim woman on the campus of NCSU the day after three other Muslim students were shot. I have no idea what it’s like to be a black man and watch the video of Walter Scott shot in the back. Or to be a mother after the Michael Brown court decision. Just as you don’t know what it’s like to be a 30-something guy reading 250 poems a day and then writing this blog post at 1AM. But maybe you would, for a moment, if I wrote a great poem about it … When I read those poems, I'm given a new experience and am changed.
The reason why I don’t like most poetry is that I’m only interested in this magic. I don’t care about sound or metaphor or beauty or wit, or any of those elements, unless they work in the service of the magic of the poem. All else is exercise. All else is masturbation. If a poem isn’t transformative, then it has no use for me—and I don’t know why it would have a use for any modern audience.
Transformation is hard, though, and most of even what’s published doesn’t really work. Magic is magical; it’s mysterious. An incantation can fail for the slightest and most indeterminate of reasons. Moreover, it’s subjective—we all know art is subjective, but this is why it’s subjective. Even the best of spells won’t work on every demon—but that doesn’t mean we should stop casting them, or exposing their power to those who haven’t experienced the magic yet.
So I don’t like most poetry—and I’m sure, if you were being honest, you’d say you don’t like most poetry either. We can admit it; it’s all right.
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[Photo by plaisanter~, CC-BY-SA, Magic No Mystery: Conjuring Tricks with Cards, Balls, and Dice, Magic Writing, Performing Animals, W.H. (William Henry) Cremer, 1876. Not in copyright, link]
Love this Tim. You've described why I am a student of both poetry and magic (and don't like most poetry or most magic shows)--not easy to cast those spells, but so worth trying:)
Posted by: Mary Monroe | April 14, 2015 at 10:02 PM
I think a lot of this needed to be said and needs to be read. I however refuse to accept, even if it is true, this: "none of that value is left. The idea of using poetry for communication or commemoration is anachronistic, to say the least." My blog post "Is handwriting doomed" http://communicatorsandcommunications.com/2009/10/30/is-handwriting-doomed/ is an analog. In it you can read about why the boat builder opted for a tiller rather than a steering wheel. I was asked to write about my writing process for a publication in which several of my poems recently appeared. In it I stated that "I strongly believe that we need poetry of all sorts, just as we allow for classical music alongside rap," so I may take pleasure in a bit more than only that which is truly magical. The takeaway for me from this installment is without doubt this: that "poetry is the music of speech" -- most everybody can enjoy music, of one kind or another, I like music played on a mountain dulcimer in Appalachia as well as music played on a viola da gamba played in Carnegie Hall. I can't wait to see what is yet to unfold in this expository journey.
Posted by: Howard Richard Debs | April 15, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Well, anachronism has great value to some—I was saying that with respect to modern culture at large. Our epic stories will never again be told by reciting lines of poetry around a fire—they're told by Peter Jackson at the IMAX. That doesn't mean the former isn't still enjoyable, if you can find a group of people to enjoy it.
Posted by: Timothy Green | April 15, 2015 at 02:45 PM
Thanks for giving voice to something I know inside but didn't quite know how to say. (I rarely read anything about poetry that I agree with.) I keep wondering why I don't like much poetry. You have given me one good reason.
Posted by: Firestone Feinberg | April 15, 2015 at 09:47 PM
I expected to read many comments, but alas, the interesting dialogue this piece should have created right here, will possibly take place elsewhere at another time. I personally have room to admire a little bit of everything but find 90 percent of what Poetry magazine publishes moribund and either dull dull dull or the equivalent of Ed Woodsian movie dialogue in poetry. There's a few better pieces in their April issue (which is available as a free PDF download by the way for those who aren't subscribers or who use to be subscribers but have given up on it.... The debate about academic poetry versus 'real' poetry, or page poetry vs spoken word or spoken word vs slam vs page vs formal page.... vs organic vs BEAT vs. . . well it all at times is interesting or was interesting but doesn't change the fact that I have read some well respected poetry books and found them very respectful but containing only a few poems that I really needed to read and a few that I've shook my head and wondered who actually, really and truly likes this and why? I flash-backed while reading this to some Harlan Ellison columns I read back in the late 70s. They seemed to be a little more daring and edgy in their commentary than what most were writing. I will add one thing however... I think more people watch Peter Jackson at home on blu-ray or streaming in.. and sometimes on a tiny screen...than at IMAX. YIKES.
Posted by: Chris Jarmick | April 24, 2015 at 06:20 AM
Chris Jarmick writes: <<< I personally have room to admire a little bit of everything but find 90 percent of what Poetry magazine publishes moribund and either dull dull dull or the equivalent of Ed Woodsian movie dialogue in poetry. >>>> Do others feel this way?
Posted by: The Best American Poetry | April 24, 2015 at 04:39 PM