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November Poem
It’s the first cold November evening.
I am out driving
And there is a hitchhiker
Bearing a sign
At a quiet intersection.
I ignore the Cecil Taylor on the radio
To read it.
Perhaps they are bound for some
Exciting destination,
Or a place that I have been.
As I drive closer, the words become legible.
DESTINATION, REUBEN JACKSON’S ARMS.
OH, HOW I MISS THEM SO.
I am jubilant, flustered.
I squeal to a stop. It’s Donna!
I thought she was married and happy in Philadelphia.
We do not speak, but embrace.
I produce tears, she produces a butcher’s knife
And quickly accomplishes her deed.
She is careful to wipe the blood
From the seat covers,
And places each finger in sanitary gauze.
I still love you, she cries.
A final kiss and that still potent smile.
She still loves me, I moan before dying.
She is still neat and considerate as ever.
My pupils lock on her lovely thumb pointing northward
Across the avenue.
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Reuben Jackson is the Archivist with the University of the District of Columbia’s Felix E. Grant Jazz Archives. He is the author of two volumes of poetry, Fingering the Keys (Gut Punch Press, 1991) and Scattered Clouds (Alan Squire Publishing, 2019). His poems have been included in more than 40 anthologies. From 2012 to 2018, he was host of “Friday Night Jazz” on Vermont Public Radio, and currently co-hosts “The Sound of Surprise” on WPFW in Washington, DC.
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Good stuff
Posted by: Hailey Leithauser | November 28, 2021 at 01:12 PM
Ah, romance! A unrequited love! This is a wonderful rendering of loss via hilarity. Tragedy plus time equals comedy, equals this beautifully touching poem.
Posted by: Denise Duhamel | November 28, 2021 at 01:32 PM
What Denise said. Plus I am always grateful for a Real Surprise. Woo hoo.
Posted by: clarinda | November 28, 2021 at 01:39 PM
what a wonderful poem and poet and post....deliciously satisfying as well as provocatively poignant, or vice versa...
Posted by: lally | November 28, 2021 at 02:46 PM
What a dream, shifting forward in each well measured line, each pulse, popping with surprise until its end when the speaker subtly actually never dies, whose pupils still follow that "thumb pointing northward." I love the clarity irony sudden horror/pleasure the fullest life-force of this poem.
Posted by: Don Berger | November 28, 2021 at 02:46 PM
Love hurts. With that sweet tip on the arrow. Reuben Jackson says it so well.
Posted by: Beth J | November 28, 2021 at 02:50 PM
Great to see one of Reuben's poems here. I've admired Reuben's poetry and his approach to life for a very long time. Thanks for this, Terence.
Posted by: Howard Bass | November 28, 2021 at 02:53 PM
A bebop murder poem with a good humored attitude throughout, and hey the speaker should have just kept listening to Cecil Taylor and kept driving on by. But whatcha gonna do when a beautiful ex beckons--delete her email? Just try! Great poem!!!!
Posted by: Bill Nevins | November 28, 2021 at 03:03 PM
Howard: thanks for the comment.
Posted by: Terence Winch | November 28, 2021 at 03:50 PM
What makes you think I'm not still alive? And married? In Philadelphia?
Posted by: Donna | November 28, 2021 at 05:06 PM
This is such an unusual poem for Reuben. Goes to show the man travels places that would thrill an astronaut. He certainly thrills us.
Posted by: Grace Cavalieri | November 28, 2021 at 05:24 PM
Terrific poem!
Posted by: Susan Campbell | November 28, 2021 at 05:57 PM
This poetic dream seems to confirm for the gifted author how intense is his love for Donna, but warns how dangerous that love could be. I am inclined to see this poem as the composition of one awake, but a real dream nonetheless.
Posted by: Peter Kearney | November 28, 2021 at 08:26 PM
Great poem.
Posted by: Eileen | November 29, 2021 at 08:31 AM
You know I have to love the dreamlike poem. In dreams, as in the multiverse, sooner or later everything that can happen to us, will.
It's great to see a young poet at the start of their career recognized here. Mark my words, this fellow is going places :-)
Posted by: Bernard Welt | November 29, 2021 at 12:41 PM
The first revealing tip that the driver is viscerally distracted by the hitchhiker holding a sign comes in the sixth line: “I ignore the Cecil Taylor on the radio.” The music of pianist Cecil Taylor is, quite simply, not ignorable. A free-jazz precursor, Taylor deviated from bop and cool jazz with dissonances and single-note attacks of often astonishing ferocity. If you can turn your attention away from that, something else must be compelling you. (In the bio Reuben Jackson’s own steeping in jazz cannot be clearer than the title of his Washington, D.C., radio show, “The Sound of Surprise,” which comes from former NEW YORKER jazz critic Whitney Balliett’s famously succinct definition of jazz.) “November Poem” shares that slow, then sudden heightening of awareness leading to surprise. The poem also packs the jolt of accomplished film noir, executed with startling matter-of-factness and acceptance. The driver and hitchhiker collide in a way that’s almost wished-for, even foreordained. The poem is a marvel of deceptively easeful unfolding before and during what might be described as clinical carnage, followed by near-forgiveness ending in compliments for the hitchhiker: “still neat and considerate” and “her lovely thumb.” Like Cecil Taylor’s piano playing, the poem is virtuosically unsettling and may even tuck a threading snicker in its audacity. If Reuben Jackson ever decides to write other “monthly poems,” count me in as a rapt reader.
Posted by: Dr. Earle Hitchner | November 30, 2021 at 10:24 PM