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January 30, 2022

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Pallikoodam must be somewhere on the Southern Indian coast, near Chennai perhaps. Your poem brings me to that landscape which I knew shortly after the Towers fell, a new life for me then and yes, for once they were right. But your beautiful, restorative poem rebuilds a place with fine details, the rat in the rafter snapped. Thank you for the trip back.

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Beautiful childhood memory. Thank you.

The body does not lie, for I have chills. The sweet beauty, and yet the rat. How brilliant. I'm sure her poetry could prevent Covid.
AND! happy to meet her.

I very much appreciate this poem's clarity and authentic voice--it manages very well to be autobiographical without straining too much for any distractingly fake lyric antics--in other words, it's not overly wrought, and in my friend's general words on the hyper-poetic, "hasn't spent too much time on the treadmill in the gym." A narrative like this one makes life richer.

beautifully done

Great title and then some.

Thank you for widening my world of poetry with your posts of these links!

Charlotte Boulay: Pick of the Week "Pallikoodam"

"A Song to a Child at Night-time" [Poem by Dylan Thomas, an @Ednaschoice Selection]

I will follow Edna and her Instagram posts! https://www.instagram.com/ednaschoice/?hl=en

Nice use of third-person singular in the poem. Favorite lines: "Every night / we tried to trap the rat / in the rafter." Kudos.

The tone combining wonder and matter of fact/ness is perfect. Thank you for this trip to another time (not very distant) and another place (very distant) is pitch perfect.

Wonderful evocation of a place and a time: a poem of real experience.

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