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January 16, 2022

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Wow--excellent poem!
Is there a typo in the 4th line from the end: "stan"? Or am I missing something (probably the latter!)?

I’m trying to remember all the things I don’t know yet too.

Howard, "stan" is slang and means a mix of stalker and fan. From Eminen's song, Stan.

Not everyone can be Korean, but I think everyone needs to stan this poem and poet!

I checked out urban dictionary and found that "stan" is slang for someone who is a very zealous fan. Stan can also be a verb for liking something a great deal.

Lyn Li Che's skill at internal rhyme is like rap but better: "I’ll stan my Jackie Chan doyenne Chinaman..." 

It is so painful/courageous to see all those slurs bundled together.

But isn't that what poetry is about: Truth?

Painfully beautiful poem, enhanced by the visual-- and may I take a moment to notice the art that, weekly, accompanies the poems with such boisterous beauty and accuracy.
I didn't know Lyn Li Che's work before and now I'll look for it.That's the good part about this weekly anthology.

This is a sonic powerhouse of a poem!


Thanks, Grace. I'm glad you appreciate the visual complement
to the poems. But of course you would, as a poet & visual artist yourself.

I love this beautiful poem and the artwork.

"how easily/my body zipperheads into anything else...a coin slot/cooter choking open..."--this poem's an ear's feast.

to all of the comments above: ditto


Eileen---thanks for the comment.

I love the poem and very much appreciate the irony of learning a new American slang word from it!!

Excellent poem!

Wow!
Nice visuals too!

I agree with Denise -- the poem is a powerhouse. "like a racist’s naughty nursery rhyme" -- clever, daring, and cheeky at the same time. Rage controlled by wit.

This is a marvelous poem, but I like the title most of all: (s)nicknames that lurk in the quiet of your mind.

There's also beautiful poetry expressed in the facial pic of Lyn Li Che.

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I left it
on when I
left the house
for the pleasure
of coming back
ten hours later
to the greatness
of Teddy Wilson
"After You've Gone"
on the piano
in the corner
of the bedroom
as I enter
in the dark


from New and Selected Poems by David Lehman

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