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In Progress
We adjust the background
so that I am still in a forest,
but the traditional kind,
not one made of cement and glass,
but composed primarily of wood
and auxiliary vegetal matter,
aerated with avian sonorities,
and partly veiled by more “air products”:
innocuous mist or fog —
for there is such a generous
spacing between predators
that it would make our Paleolithic relatives,
wherever they might be watching from,
think that living in our world
would be a safe and wonderful thing.
I pause in the mist or fog, because
it is a good place for retrieving ancient data
to supplement the present with;
that is, what’s left of the present
after the morning news
has finished most of it off —
and I found something: When Phil Niekro
retired from the Atlanta Braves
there was no longer anyone
playing in major league baseball
older than I was. He achieved
this distinction in 1987
and will never relinquish it.
What has happened since then?
Honestly, I don’t keep track of him.
Oh, you mean to me? Well, lots of things,
really, but I’ll get to them later,
since I’ve often admonished myself
for living in the past, although
I only did that when living in the past.
The Phil Niekro discovery
came through one of the newspapers
I perused during the eons of down time
consequent to proofreading at Forbes,
where in two years my only noteworthy
“catch” was pointing out that Luxemburg
was not a principality, as written—a synonym
for a minuscule polity—but a grand duchy.
In the following week, while
resting imperceptibly on my laurels,
I missed a typo so egregious that my luster
was tarnished beyond reclamation.
So back to the present, or what’s
left of the present after the evening news
has chewed it to pieces —
but there was not a word
about the Somali pirates
who attempted to seize my poems
and hold them hostage.
What were your poems doing
in the Strait of Hormuz?
You mean the Gulf of Aden.
You may well ask.
I wish I were at liberty to say.
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So that’s as far as I got with the first draft on my laptop,
while sitting unnoticed for an hour in the shoe store
except by the guy in the chair on the other side of the aisle,
who was keeping an eye on me until my contact showed up—
2 o’clock was that approaching hour—and then he abruptly left
a minute before she, the no-nonsense-taking Mrs. Blackstone,
walked in from a long-past-due assignment,
and when I mentioned the departed observer, she said
that he wasn’t one of hers; and I looked down at my watch
to evade the stare that italicized my blunder,
and saw it was a quarter to three—I had just lost 45 minutes!
but in fact it was 55 years that I needed to go back and fix.
Those alterations will never fit in the space at the end of the file,
though they set off reflections enough to beguile the obfuscating eye.
2019-20
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Tony Towle began writing poetry in 1960. His connection to the New York School dates from 1963, when he took workshops at the New School with Kenneth Koch and Frank O’Hara. Since then, he has published thirteen books of poetry, most recently Noir (Hanging Loose Press, 2017); as well as a book of prose: Memoir 1960-1963 (Faux Press, 2001). My First Three Books (Vehicle Editions, 2020), combines an interview, photographs, and a CD of Towle reading some of his early work. More of Towle’s poetry, interviews, readings, etc., can be found at his website and at Penn Sound.
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So cool. I love it.
Posted by: Barbara Henning | April 23, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Wonderful! Tony is one of my favourite poets. My best wishes to him, as always. Hang in there, Tony.
Posted by: Martin Stannard | April 24, 2023 at 02:44 AM
WOW
Who else could write
so that I am still in a forest,
but the traditional kind,
not one made of cement and glass,
but composed primarily of wood
and auxiliary vegetal matter,
aerated with avian sonorities,
and partly veiled by more “air products”:
innocuous mist or fog —
for there is such a generous
spacing between predators
Not to mention the rest of this delightfully undulating poem. I have to admit I am biased....I have loved and admired his poems and his sly wit for longer than I care to remember.
Bravo, marchons
Posted by: JS Venit | April 24, 2023 at 04:56 AM
As Terence says, Tony Towle really is incomparable--totally original, intelligent, uncanny in the way this poem travels so widely while still staying right on a great beam of light. It's my first look at anything he's written and I'll certainly start this week by looking for more. Fabulous pick, colossal poem!
Posted by: Don Berger | April 24, 2023 at 08:12 AM
I've never been more delighted having my senses rearranged. Love it.
Posted by: Greg Masters | April 24, 2023 at 08:14 AM
This poem is fantastic! Love, love love it! Thanks Tony for writing it and Terence for bringing it to us!
Posted by: Wanda R Phipps | April 24, 2023 at 08:23 AM
The Tao of Towle is impressive here. We are ALL in progress--or should be. Then again, regress is a tough adversary. Towle makes this poem as adventurous as it is self-questioning. Perhaps Ron Padgett said it best: “Tony Towle went beyond writing the kind of poem that is fixed in place, like a butterfly specimen, which might be beautiful but certainly is dead. Towle’s poems are beautiful too, not because they form decorous displays, but because they are alive with intelligence, urbanity, and multiple voices and views, alive the way the real world is alive anytime we are brave or naïve enough to open up and let it be as astonishing as it is.” Thanks, Terence, for using your unerring critical trowel to unearth for us this evergreen poem by Towle.
Posted by: Dr. Earle Hitchner | April 24, 2023 at 08:23 AM
Kudos also for including the baseball card showing pitcher Phil Niekro. He threw knuckleballs, something like Tony Towle. What a complete treat!
Posted by: Dr. Earle Hitchner | April 24, 2023 at 08:30 AM
Thank you for bringing us this. “The stare that italicized my blunder” !! One pleasant surprise after another — lurking intricacies — a complete success.
Posted by: Justin Jamail | April 24, 2023 at 09:25 AM
Quintessential Towle: wry humor, linguistic brilliance, playfully seriousness. Whenever I need a poetic recharge, I pick one of Tony's many books off my shelf .
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Posted by: MARK PAWLAK | April 24, 2023 at 09:36 AM
Don: Thanks for the comment.
Posted by: Terence Winch | April 24, 2023 at 09:46 AM
Thank you for the comment, Wanda.
Posted by: Terence Winch | April 24, 2023 at 09:47 AM
Thanks, Earle, for your comment (& for Ron's!).
Posted by: Terence Winch | April 24, 2023 at 09:58 AM
Wonderful poem. I love it!
Posted by: Eileen | April 24, 2023 at 10:18 AM
How does Tony manage to get all the outrageous leaps into a perfectly clear narrative, and to establish a perfect tone for the risky diction? It’s because he’s doing what he does so well. Nice work.Terrific poem.
Posted by: Dick Lourie | April 24, 2023 at 10:27 AM
This Tony Towle poem goes so many wonderful places, tour through consciousness, riveting all the way, completely original. So glad you featured it.
Posted by: Gerald Fleming | April 24, 2023 at 11:34 AM
bedazzling, yet restrained, exquisitely so
Posted by: lally | April 24, 2023 at 01:15 PM
One of my favorite poets—- from the forest to Forbes to the evening news—- love this. Gillian mccain
Posted by: Gillian McCain | April 24, 2023 at 02:54 PM
Tony is always at the top of his game. Great choice, Terence. Terrific photo of the author as well.
Posted by: Vincent Katz | April 24, 2023 at 04:42 PM
Thanks for the comment, Vincent.
Posted by: Terence Winch | April 24, 2023 at 05:15 PM
Dad's graduated to relatively unknown national treasure-hood. So it is with artists - gone today celebrated tomorrow ...
Posted by: Malcolm Towle | April 25, 2023 at 09:58 AM
So wonderful to read this amazing poem by one of my favorite living poets! Tony Towle has a magical way of turning every poem into an occasion for wit, free association, humanity, and historical reportage.
Posted by: Andrew McCarron | April 25, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Many thanks, Terence and Tony. Really magical.
Posted by: Phyllis Rosenzweig | April 25, 2023 at 04:20 PM
Tony has a knack for taking us around the world in a warp of time with a palette of spectral color that is unimaginable without ever having left the room. Brilliant and magnificent.
Posted by: Tom Goldenberg | April 25, 2023 at 04:39 PM
When you sign up for a Tony Towle Tour he may take you away into the forest, thru the mist or fog, past Paleolithic relatives, Phil Niekro’s retirement, the Gulf of Aden, and into a shoe store – if you’re lucky.
Posted by: David Kelley | April 25, 2023 at 04:45 PM