The New York School Diaspora (Part Seventy-Six): Melinda Wilson [by Angela Ball]

Scene Under

Two beetles hammock on the thin algae skin / of the lake’s edge.
Two lake chars lounge in the black nether depths,
fat and content to be trout together.
A couple reclines on the city park’s lawn,
overgrown as it is. Deer ticks tingle at the proximity of warm blood.
The woman turns from her back to her stomach,
and feels the pulse of the underground train through the soft skin / of her belly.
It feels like a baby swimming
                                                                        in her wanting underwater.

                                                                                                                    -Melinda Wilson

Melinda Wilson is a poet and educator living in the Bronx, NYC. Her first full-length poetry collection, What it Was Like to Be a Woman, is available for pre-order from Indolent Books. 

The New York School Diaspora (Part Seventy-Six): Melinda Wilson

Melinda Wilson’s compact and compelling “Scene Under” is a contretemps between surface and depth reminiscent of Frank O’Hara’s “A Step Away from Them “:

     First, down the sidewalk

     where laborers feed their dirty

     glistening torsos 

O’Hara gives us the urban surface and makes the laborers centaurs—the human halves feeding the ugly-beautiful “dirty / glistening torsos” that contain the stygian distances of digestion.

Wilson begins with animals in physical repose, an interplay of pairs. The “two beetles” companion the lake edge, “hammock” on its bright green lid. The lake chars—large, loguey creatures, are equally at ease in its lower depths. The poem’s satisfaction seems to escalate; the couple “reclines” serenely, uncaring that it’s overgrown. The poem becomes granular, giving us minute ticks that can’t believe their luck “at the proximity of warm blood.” We are reminded that what is ominous from a human viewpoint—possible Lyme-disease inflicting bites—is pure pleasure for the tiny vampires, multiple instead of paired. The scene bristles with life, over and “under.”

Then, suddenly, there’s a lone being, “the woman,” “the” endowing importance. It seems, at first, that she’s simply employing an ordinary sunbathing move, turning “from her back to her stomach” but then she is umbilicaled to the thrum of an underground train, “through the soft skin / of her belly”—the expressed caesura of the back slash reiterating the lake edge of line one, but also emphasizing the delicacy of what occurs, which is this astonishing image: “It feels like a baby swimming.”   Somehow, the woman is being discovered from below by her missing other. The poem provides a wide space in which to draw breath before delivering its close: “in her wanting underwater.” Like O’Hara’s poem, Wilson’s ends “down the dark stairs.” Implications glimmer; the woman’s perhaps-suppressed “wanting,” her watery, generative depths—capable, on their own, of longing: a reverberation orgasmic in its portmanteau of fulfillment and dawning sorrow. – Angela Ball

Comments

[Annette C. Boehm]

wonderful poem! Thank you, Melinda and Angela!