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The Lives of Jazz Fathers
Let’s resurrect the trumpet players;
the saxophonists named for fauna gone
extinct in the Congos and Barrios,
the worship and wail, the shadow song
of 40s Noir—black and white ailments
of New York’s terminally cool.
There are no more quartets—
only quartered ensemble split from
cities coated to chin, faces blurred white
in pedestrian winds and yellow cabs.
Now, the drummers search estate sales, rummage
for swivel stools to post on Etsy. The bassists
study Phlebotomy, read blood panels for Diabetes.
The pianists work dental offices, drill tartars
to reveal the whites of cuspids. The saxophonists
teach Tai Chi classes, sleep at the Chinatown Y.
I mean to say I miss them: the notes who stroll
October for pick up chess in parks
with coffees and fingerless gloves; the chop
chords at brick-and-mortar steak houses;
the soloists smile in the amber memory
of nightclubs numb with intoxication.
They’re dead – the blue veranda is silent
where they jammed, moon drift in palm
leaves and ivory; notes of copper and zinc.
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Jacob Anthony Ramírez is an educator and poet. He is a distinguished graduate of Lancaster University’s Creative Writing M.A. In 2022, Oxford Brookes University’s Ignition Press released Kitchen Boombox, his debut pamphlet. His poetry appears in The Breakbeat Poets, LatiNEXT, The Best New Poets 2022, and Latino Book Review. He is currently at work on his first full collection in Sonoma County, California, where he lives with his wife and two children.
__________________________________________________________________________________ William P. Gottlieb, Portrait of Thelonious Monk, Howard McGhee, Roy Eldridge, and Teddy Hill, Minton’s Playhouse, New York, 1947.
I love this poem. I am forwarding it to TJ English, author of Dangerous Rhythms!
"the soloists smile in the amber memory
of nightclubs numb with intoxication.
They’re dead – the blue veranda is silent
where they jammed, moon drift in palm
leaves and ivory"
Posted by: Bill Nevins | September 01, 2024 at 10:46 AM
no more beautiful ending ever written
Posted by: Grace Cavalieri | September 01, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Once upon a time . . . giants walked the earth. The Gottlieb photograph complements the poem beautifully. Might I also recommend the photographs of Herman Leonard? The lowlight b/w photos of Gottlieb, Leonard, et al. from the late ‘40s and the ‘50s register what lurks so wistfully behind this evocative poem.
Posted by: Thomas O'Grady | September 01, 2024 at 11:03 AM
I love this bittersweet reminder that artistic giants hide unknown among us in dentist offices and steak-house kitchens, laboring at the quotidian and humming their memories.
Posted by: Geoffrey Himes | September 01, 2024 at 11:26 AM
brilliant tribute to genius(es) gone but not forgotten, resonating in the recordings, photography, poetry, and films of an era I was thankfully alive for and aware of, (and a tiny part of), but never saw captured as wonderfully as this...
Posted by: lally | September 01, 2024 at 12:42 PM
A beautiful, sad elegy.
Posted by: Phyllis Rosenzweig | September 01, 2024 at 01:44 PM
I love this poem!…I could hear the music as I read it…and as I walk the streets of Harlem..Thanks Terence and Jacob…
Posted by: Sr . Leslie | September 01, 2024 at 02:01 PM
Thanks, Leslie. Glad you liked it.
Posted by: Terence Winch | September 01, 2024 at 02:36 PM
This poem and also the poem are beyond any casual comment I could make. Suffice it to say that for 29+ years I never missed a Sunday concert at Baltimore’s Famous Ballroom. I heard all the greats play in person $5 and bring your own food to share with wonderful strangers at big round tables.
Posted by: Clarinda | September 01, 2024 at 02:52 PM
Beautiful poem. I loved “the soloists smiled”. Brings back special memories.
Posted by: Eileen Reich | September 01, 2024 at 03:54 PM
Dig? Dig!
Posted by: Bob Holman | September 01, 2024 at 03:58 PM
How lucky we are to have all that music & history, in no small part thanks to this beautiful poem.
Posted by: Elinor Nauen | September 01, 2024 at 04:56 PM
Hitting on all cylinders. Made my day!
Posted by: Alan Bernheimer | September 01, 2024 at 05:39 PM
All,
Enormous gratitude to Terence Winch and you, the readers, who donated your time to comment on "The Lives of Jazz Fathers." This poem is informed by the many experiences I had with my father, a jazz musician, and his heroes. With meager resources, pop scraped enough cash for my brother Jemal and me to see Miles Davis, Weather Report, Spyro Gyra, Chick Corea, and so many others.
If you love this poem, please consider checking out my book, Kitchen Boombox, which is available at the link to this post.
In community,
Jacob Ramírez
Posted by: Jacob Ramírez | September 01, 2024 at 07:33 PM
This poem brings back those memories of nights spent in the Village, NYC, where fine music existed everywhere, in every small bar and you didn’t have to search to hear Dexter Gordon or Herbie Hancock playing after hours. Thank you .
Posted by: Linda Hickman | September 02, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Terrific poem on a subject dear to my heart, and a wonderful photograph, too.
Posted by: David Lehman | September 02, 2024 at 11:21 PM
Is (was) your father Ram Ramirez, who wrote "Lover Man (oh, where can you be?)"? I heard him play numerous times at the West End Bar circa 1975 -1976 in a series organized by Phil Schaap with trumpeter Franc leaving the band.
Posted by: David Lehman | September 03, 2024 at 06:24 PM
David,
Thank you for your curiosity and kindness. While Ram Ramirez isn't a relative, I would warmly claim him as kin.
My brother, Jemal, inherited most of pop's percussion chops. He's a well-regarded Jazz drummer.
Me -- I'm just doing my darndest with this poetry.
Again, many thanks!
In community,
JR
Posted by: Jacob Ramirez | September 04, 2024 at 02:07 AM