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Awón/Sin
We will tell each other that
we can't choose
between one country and another,
we will tell each other
that we will kill
even if we don't want to,
we will regret saying it
and we will start
all over again.
Your pain will hang inside mine,
mine inside yours, you will
comb my hair, and I will comb yours.
You will press your ears against my wall,
I will press mine against your body,
we will love and inspect,
we will try and live
with what follows us—
but no one can change this:
we are unable to tear
our eyes from each other.
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Nathalie Handal has been described as a “contemporary Orpheus.” She has lived in four continents, is the author of 10 award-winning books, translated in over 15 languages, including Life in a Country Album, winner of the Palestine Book Award, and The Republics, lauded as “one of the most inventive books by one of today’s most diverse writers,” and winner of the Virginia Faulkner Award for Excellence in Writing and the Arab American Book Award. Handal is the recipient of awards from the PEN Foundation, Lannan Foundation, Fondazione di Venezia, Centro Andaluz de las Letras, and Africa Institute, among others. She is professor at New York University-AD, and writes a column, “The City and the Writer” for Words without Borders. [Author photo by Andrea Salerno.]
“Awon / Sin”: Aramaic. Awon appears frequently throughout the Old Testament, and in parallel with other words related to sin, such as chatta'th and pesha’.
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Tahia Halim (1919-2003), Four Women Braiding Each Other’s Hair. Halim was an Egyptian painter celebrated for her poetic and folkloric works.
Yes.This says = in the most elegant way= even if terrible election results happen, no one can touch the consciousness.
Posted by: Grace Cavalieri | October 20, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Thanks to both of you: author of this poem and him who brought it to us
Posted by: Clarinda Harriss | October 20, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Remarkably clear and yet intriguing poem. Brava to the author and thanks, Terence!
Posted by: Bill Nevins | October 20, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Thanks for the comment, Clarinda.
Posted by: Terence Winch | October 20, 2024 at 12:00 PM
This poem's cadence,its pulse, helps float it urgently into the listener's ear and into the air, both at once, and the word "tear" at the end is the breaking point, a sharp interesting surprise where the the word takes over in full, beyond the passage of gestures, thoughts, and feelings that we follow and accept up to that point. Glad this poem's here--thank you Terence!
Posted by: Don Berger | October 20, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Oh, what a poem…yes, we will tell each other…we will tell each other and hope that will relieve our pain in knowing we are alll guilty….but only love…Love will and we will start all over again…it reminds me of an old monk’s tale…when asked, “what do you do?” In a monastery, he replies, “ we fall and we get up again…”…and it comes going on like this…I will definitely be checking her poetry out…thank you Terence and thank you Nathalie…
Posted by: Sr. Leslie | October 20, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Prof. Berger: Thanks for that comment!
Posted by: Terence Winch | October 20, 2024 at 01:42 PM
Bill: thanks for the comment.
Posted by: Terence Winch | October 20, 2024 at 02:09 PM
Leslie---thanks, as always, for the great response.
Posted by: Terence Winch | October 20, 2024 at 02:49 PM
Love this beautiful and sad poem. The artwork is amazing.
Posted by: Eileen Reich | October 20, 2024 at 03:45 PM
Thank you for your poem, Nathalie: "Your pain will hang inside mine,/mine inside yours".
Posted by: KC Trommer | October 20, 2024 at 04:52 PM
The urgent dualities that haunt this poem remind me of two grieving planets in opposite orbits, endlessly circling a dark star. Thanks so much, Nathalie and Terence.
Posted by: David Beaudouin | October 24, 2024 at 09:07 PM
Thanks for the comment, David.
Posted by: Terence Winch | October 25, 2024 at 11:34 AM