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Two Poems from Whirlwind Duststorm by John Hawke [Introduced by Thomas Moody]

There’s a certain watchmaker’s quality to many of the poems in John Hawke’s collection Whirlwind Duststorm (published by the excellent Grand Parade Poets): assemblages of distinct parts meticulously pieced together into compact forms that give measure to grander, more abstract notions, while always being embedded in the quotidian.* Hawke’s descriptive precision and exactness of image are impressive, and they are often in tension with the open-ended nature of the poems themselves. This tension creates an enjoyably destabilizing effect for the reader, as when one stares too hard at an object and it begins to shimmer and blur, opening up the world from the particular to a more powerful and interesting ambiguity. The two poems that bookend the collection, “Axis” and “Dormition,” both achieve this effect.


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John Hawke teaches literary studies at Monash University in Melbourne and is poetry editor of the Australian Book Review. His previous volume of poetry, Aurelia, was published by Cordite Press in 2015.



Axis

 

One sulphurous puff, then the white stick

is flicked spinning in a flare of sparks,

red globes throbbing down the harbour channel.

One vulnerable hand lifted, its sallow disclosure

pallid as the history of human error

pasted on placards, where arc-lights scatter

a brittle confetti: the florilegium of choice.

These itinerants marred by the stages of grieving

gather by handfuls at the terminus, swell into masses.

Some still bear marks of disfigurement

like mortal wounds, gashes insecurely bound,

heaped in the exhaustion of travel.

Most are older than usual, in loosely

drooping camisoles, or subsiding gowns.

A woman offers a baby she has never fed

to another for burial, passing in aura

through the mirror’s cathexis, the attendants

hunched in flag-bright uniforms,

paddling a ghost-train sleigh under the patchwork

awning of a coral tree, through scarlet petals

and tunnels of black opal. Then a steel door slams to.




Dormition

 

A mirror that refuses to light. Paired

black cockatoos patiently rowing

avenues of pleached hornbeams,

 

aurora hunters calculating degrees

of space grammar. The clutch and

groan of the grain elevator, laddered

 

as the scaffolding of Golgotha,

signals harvest: coils of feed grass

rolled silver under sheets of rain.

 

There was noise coming from your

house last night. The pipes rusting

closed deliver a treacle of ochre

 

and untraceable metals. That awful

Rachmaninoff under Richter’s piercing

thrumming of thrown daggers.

 

Lopped paspalum hovers yellow for days

on the steady pool of this late season.

I’m very comfortable. I’d prefer to sleep.

 

A fine rain hatches his skeletal shoes

crossing the light from the vestibule.

He doesn’t realise that he’s dead.







*A notable exception to this is the truly brilliant prose poem at the center of the collection, “The Wedding,” which, at eight pages, is too lengthy to post in full here but is alone worth seeking out the collection for. You can also read the terrific title poem, “Whirlwind Duststorm,” here.


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